mizz-iceberg

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Hah! The ending made me laugh. :lol: Good one! So true. Something not exactly like this but quite close to this happened to a friend of mine. Lets just say ...

..I wasn't too impressed. Put this in the non-fiction section titled "I'm angry and I have to let out my feelings" Because that's what this 'poem' sounded like to me. ...

Interesting poem. I read the title 'last kiss' and I thought it was going to be another one of those poems, extremely cliche. But I was wrong. This was wonderful. ...

Hey there! Welcome To YWS. I liked this poem. It had good imagery and the emotions well brought out. Now there were a few errors and that's why I'm here ...

Great job! I just noticed a bit of awkward wording, but other than that no biggies. To tell you the truth, when I found out this story was about werewolf ...

Everyone's pretty much already pointed out what I noticed. I like the way the dialogue in your writing, as it doesn't seem too awkward. Fix those grammar mistakes and you're ...

I have to say I loved this. I like how you explained about drugs through a 'story' instead of going on about the misuses of drugs. Is that what you ...

And it'd really help if you guys, if anyone knows, could tell me what a court summons would say? I need it for a new story I'm writing, and I ...

Oh my goodness, this is just plain hilarious. I did not really note any grammar or spelling mistakes. Probably because I was so absorbed in this piece. I was pretty ...

“What’re we doing for breakfast ,” Rumpel said with a yawn I think it's more of a question than a statement. “What’re we doing for breakfast ? " Rumpel asked ...

I read all the review above and everyone has already pretty much told you what I thought. So I'll try not to say anything already said. This poem created an ...

Very cute. Made me giggle. But I'm not really gonna crit. But I think you wrote this for fun, out of randomness. Right? Like you are not too serious about ...

Haha thats a fun poem you've written here... Was slightly confusing at places... Y'kno I believe that every normal person is slightly insane. And if you're not then you're not ...

This piece was truly beautiful. I was completely absorbed! Ummm just a little something I noticed: I was walking around a quaint town with no particular name that I can ...