miyaviloves

I put the number in the title, sorry about that i forgot :( so now its 10.5 :D

Thanks for that, I was thinking that i needed some dialogue here but I;m just not how to fit it in. I don't know, i guess its harder for me ...

Ooh there is an actual play button *is impressed* tho its a bit creepy... Well done as always :D Meevs x

I liked this, and like Rieda i like that you didnt know anything about the characters, it would be anyone. Is this part of something longer? Meevs x

i really like your poetry, like Sez said, it is quite eerie but i love it allthe same. Well done on getting this published! (you wrote this when you were ...

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I agree with Reida they are very cute! Its really emotional, you have a way of getting the reader so attached to the characters! Look forward to reading more! Meevs ...

This is good, very mysterious. I especially like the opening stanza, its very effective. And the last lines are also very very good, i like this alot, well done. Meevs ...

Wow, i really loved that, it sounds so calm in such a crazy atmosphere? I think your writing style is very unique, its almost poetic and beautiful. Well done, amazing! ...

I agree with Mimi and Alainna, this is a wonderful peice, i prefer this to some of your other stuff. Oh and it is spelt wrong, should be heat right? ...

I cant say i have read Dark Materials. we studied Phillip Pullman at highschool though, he seems like a very interesting man! Meevs x

I realllllly hate Dr. Haaser >.< The end part of this once was really sweet, I just want JOn out of there, he isnt crazy and ohhh its frustrating me ...

Gah Kyle better be real, I think he is though anyway I'm off to read #28! Meevs x

I have to agree with Cadmium about not really getting it, its a very well written poem, but I'm just not sure if it really means anything to me. You ...

Wow, that was really good, originial, i was looking through your portfolio and this is the first thing i read its amazing and flows brilliantly. Well done, you deserve a ...