Published April 8, 2007
Taken down due to publishing
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Turns out I missed a chapter... O_O That's a bit weird lol. Anyway, this was pretty good, I think it's the first I couldn't find any mistakes in.
But maybe there were nad I just couldn't see. I dunno how drunk people talk lol! Anyway, I'll go try to work out where I'm actually up to. I've probably missed something else too. :p
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I put the number in the title, sorry about that i forgot
so now its 10.5 
you see, the problem is, I dont know quite where this belongs in the rest of the story....which makes it hard for me to read...