mikepyro

Glad you Enjoyed it but There aren't many grammar errors at all. I shall go through again editing as I always do several times before posting. Considering the length I ...

Thanks smylin, some mighty big praise there. :) glad you enjoyed it.

I remember this back in the day. very nice little piece. Simplistic and real keep it up, you manage to capture the style and feel without seeming manipulative. Well done!

Un little piece. Good work!

Many thanks you two, glad you enjoyed it! :D

I'm a ways away? -means he's not right next to the gates. so he has to walk. and as for the extra words, it's just how he talks. people don't ...

Much of the piece is dialogue focused. And much is based on fact, including the three o'clock phone call play out. I chose to focus instead on the here and ...

wasn't meant to be a talk down to the reader. it's just the way I wrote it, I felt it fit well for the story, the begininng paragraph. sorry you ...

the story isn't meant to be continued. it's a tragic tale. the story of a martyr. martyrs kill themselves. it was just meant to show the actions leading to his ...

yes Steinbeck and McCarthy are prob the most american you can get in terms of great writing make sure if you read McCarthy get The Road or No Country for ...

so glad you enjoyed the piece kickstart. adequate man is my most recent story, bit of a break from my normal style. actually started off as a horror story but ...

well. a spring chicken is a term for something really small. as opposed to something really big. so tommy's not a small guy, but he knows a challenge when he ...

Twilight makes me weep for the future of literature. All you need to do is throw hot guys and a cheesy romance at the page. Plus some kind of supernatural ...

thanks for the review. glad you enjoyed the piece. as for the telling, well it is written from a mundane, journal like approach, hense the more straightforward, focused mind. and ...

I hope you enjoy the style. The character and his world are one of my favorite creations as of late. Dry comedy, gotta love it. Mike