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Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking
I love this!
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Deeper Wounds [[Chapter 1]]
I like it. You could be a bit more descriptive though and you could make it longer.
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1
This is really good and has a lot of potential. :)
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Other Side of Eternity
Oh my gosh, this was amazing. You are an amazing writer!
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Story, The Song, and The Picture (prolouge)
This is really nice, It makes me want to read more. Good Job!
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
LOVE IT!
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Untitled idea
Hahahaha a mermaid! That made me laugh for some reason, but I really like your idea :)
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Another Fight?
I love it! Seriously I do.
May 22, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Not to wreck your story idea but a vampire and mortal in love has been used many times.
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Never Meant to Fall in Love
Okay i really like this! It's amazing and when you're finished i'm sure it will be amazing!
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: No name
haha i really like this. some typos but those can be easily fixes so overall very nice!
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: An Open Letter
I really like this.
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Sickness
This is so fascinating it kept me reading until the last sentence. It's definitely a book I would read and i hope to read more.
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars
This is really good. A few mistakes, but nothing horrid. I really like this idea although it's been used many times. (two girls used to be friends, one becomes popular ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Summer Camp-Chapter 1
haha thanks iheartbooks. i really haven't worked on this in a while and after rereading this i realize many mistakes that i will have to fix. :P p.s. my teacher ...
Apr 20, 2010