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I really like this and it's well written. Kudos. Haha :)

Thank you so much for the editing. Those little mistakes I must have missed. I agree with the tip of making the dialogue more realistic and I'll fix it. I ...

I like this a lot.

I really liked it. Little repetitive with the hot and salty tears but overall good and very emotional. GOOD JOB

Thanks, and about the confusion. I know, I need to write it better, but I'm working on making it clearer. Thanks again

Thank you guys for taking the time to read it. It's truly appreciated.

I read the first sentence and I really liked it, so I kept reading. I really enjoyed this. :)

I like it a lot :))

I really like this and enjoyed reading it. Just reread and correct some minor mistakes. Good job :)

I like how you describe things. It's written fairly nicely :))

thanks I'll work on it.

In like sixth grade I read a book called "Hanging On To Max" by margaret bechard. After reading that book I loved it, but I could never understand why. I ...

I think I'm in love...with this! haha it's really good.

thanks, yeah I'm not very good.

Keep going, I want to read more! haha I really liked this :)