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Re: He's not quite ready
Very good! I loved it! awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No need to critique!
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Falling for Jake
This is very good.Or great. But it's confusing. You think she loves jake first and then shes sorta hates or fears him.?
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Over 13: The AIM Tango
wow awesome
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 2 (edited)
omg this is awesome
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: When you smile
That was entirely good.but it needs to be moved topoetry collunm. Good job!
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: I need you
This is really good buts its alittle depressing. It needs more life to it. But anyways good job!!!!
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: the walk
gosh poeple what is your problem it was her first try and she has never written oetry before and + shes my supprotive. why do so many poeple have to ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Jealousy
wow, that was very good.i have no need to critiqoe this for except NOTHING!!!!!!lol good job anyways!:) -midnightsun10135
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: fall
wow, intense and it was great. it was very impressive. i loved it. keep up the good work!!!!!
Oct 25, 2008