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Re: House of Night- Bitten
Hi MysticalBlood I like this a lot but I don't recognise the book that the ideas are from. It does jump tenses but that makes it good as she is ...
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Re: no name x more added
Hi butterflyflutterby2 I like this but it reminds me a lot of Harry Potter. When you wright you need to make sure that you have punctuation otherwise it is really ...
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Re: Secrets - Chapter 2
Hi whatevr88 Thanks for the pm. I like this chapter, you have the start of a really good story and this chapter isn't to bad. I can't see anything wrong ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Hermione's Adventure
Hi brassnbridle I like this, it is a fanfiction of one of my all time favourite books. I had never really thought of what Hermione did after Harry went through ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Story, Chapter One.
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Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Flickering Flame--Chapter 1
Hi Apple I like this story and I think you have a real talent for writing. I would advise re-reading your work, it helps to see if there are any ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Drained {Chapter Three}
Hi *writewatiwant* I really like this post and thanks for the pm. Nit-picking time he picked the taser and soon she was out of consciousness. this would sound better as ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part two
Hi bubblegum I like this part of the story a lot. I saw a few mistakes but they were minor ones so I would advise a re-read of your work ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Born At Dawn
Hi Quetseli I really like this story and I think it is a really good beginning. I think you should re-read it though as I saw a few small mistakes, ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Secrets - Chapter 1
Hi whatevr88 I like this. The guy thing is unexpected and it keeps the reader interested. I hope you carry on with it as it could be a real good ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Ebony Ink
Hi Ella Thompson I like this and I think its a good beginning, carry on writing it and see what happens. Isn't there supposed to be a capital letter at ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel
Hi TheNewHero I like the other books in the series but as yet I haven't read Max or Fang, but when my mum has finished Fang I am so next ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Brethren's Child
Hi KanenRenoir I like this post. I think its really good, I especially like the way that there will be two narrators of the story, it can sometimes make the ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Drained {Chapter Two}
Hi *writewatiwant* Thanks for the pm. I like the way the mc is a strong character and she won't give in easily. I didn't see any mistakes but some bits ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Artemis Fowl Fanfic: Chapter 1
Hi ANate145 I like this. I like the way that the mc is Artemis's cousin and is probably just as smart as the young thief. Can't see anything wrong with ...
Mar 29, 2010