midnightdreary

Aw man, I totally loved this story! It's so original! It was cute to think about costumes dancing around a room and gloating to each other! Thanks for posting this!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the poem.

Oh I totally should have read about the structure of the poem more carefully. And thanks for the explanation. That part makes complete sense now.

Hey! I enjoyed this story a lot, and I was especially impressed by how you were able to create a certain mood within the first few sentences and stick to ...

Okay I have no idea why that review submitted three times, but sorry about that.

Hello! I read this poem and I loved it so much! The message is wonderful and the metaphors you use are just amazing! Also, I read this poem and was ...

Hello! I read this poem and I loved it so much! The message is wonderful and the metaphors you use are just amazing! Also, I read this poem and was ...

Thank you! I was hoping that people would feel a little more loved after reading this.

Haha my English teacher made that same correction for me, actually. She then kind of went back on it, so I didn't change it. But, now that two, people pointed ...

Yeah, I'm not sure I like my title, either. I've been trying to think of a better one, and I might use the one you suggested! Thank you for the ...

Wow, this review was actually super helpful, since I never think about punctuation when I'm writing poetry. I just put commas at the end of each line usually, which I'm ...

Aw this comment made my day! Thank you so much for reading!

Yeah the only reason those lines are together is because when I tried to separate them, the site just didn't format them as two separate stanzas. (Technology really isn't my ...

Hello! I enjoyed this story, because it had some poetic elements to it, especially in your choice of adjectives. In this sentence, "He was skin and bone, torn apart deep ...

Thanks! I'm also fairly new to poetry, so I'll take any help I can get! I'll be sure to take your advice into account when I revise this poem.