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This flowed so well and I have nothing whatsoever to critique it! Bravo!

I really really enjoyed this! I agree with Tydecker777 that it is going somewhere and that it would make a really good short story! Keep it up! :)

I really enjoyed this! The one on the rose had great imagery! Bravo! :)

Thank you and she was a very sweet person!

Thank you Mikko and I hope she is as well! ;)

I got the chills... Bravo once more!!!!! :)

So jealous of your skills... Bravo!!! :)

oh thanks! Um I don't think I can clarify what I meant when I said '...I heed' as I was in fifth grade and I don't think I knew what ...

thank you Rosey!! this is exactly what i need to help my writing!

oh and Sarah. The name of the baby was purposely named after you because you showed me this site lol :)

Thank you Sannah!! That was exactly what I was aiming for! My next chapter should be up really soon! It was supposed to go up a few days ago but ...

I really liked this poem! I think it flowed very well and it had just the right amount of emotion! Great job! Keep it up :)

Thanks everyone!! I agree that it was a bit choppy, but I'll keep working on it :P this was a rough draft as I wrote it a few months ago ...

Thank you so much!! I was afraid it was a little bit too rough because I didn't edit it at all but I'm glad that it is good so far!! ...

Sarah this was so well written! I could see every single part of it!! It made my whole day :) thank you so much for being so talented!!