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Thank you so much! I completely forgot to add the official coming to her house... I wonder why? I had it all figured out, but it just slipped my mind ...

Hahaha once again this made me laugh! These are quite fun to read! Hope you keep them up! Also you should think about if you do the next ones, making ...

AHHH! Thank you so much for pointing the september first thing out!! If you hadn't, I would have completely not noticed! Also I will work on the 'I' thing :P ...

AHHH! Thank you so much for pointing the september first thing out!! If you hadn't, I would have completely not noticed! Also I will work on the 'I' thing :P ...

Oh also I just wanted to add that it wasn't too long, and wasn't too short. Just right ;) Also.... POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!! I can't wait to read them!! xD ...

Thanks again! You are a really helpful editor! And I agree that I really need to work on my reality in my stories... hopefully that made sense :P Thanks once ...

Thank you so much!! This was so helpful!!!! XD XD :)

Thanks Angela!

This was very beautifully written! I don't have anything to critique about it except I agree with a few others that it should be broken up into different stanza's. Keep ...

Ok thank you! I am fairly new to this site, so I don't know how to put them into a 'novel'. But if you go to my portfolio on my ...

Thank you so much! Also thanks for the follow! I'm going to follow you right back ;)

This was quite humorous actually! There are quite a few rough edges that I would work on but other than that, very nice job! -michael

I'm literally speechless. This was AMAZING. And you're only sixteen? I congratulate you! BRAVO! :)

This is a very good piece of art! The rythm is just PERFECT! I was sort of singing it along in my head1 Very nice :) BRAVO!

This was so beautifully written! I could not have done better myself! BRAVO!! :)