User avatar

mhmmcolleenx0

  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight

    I just want to say something. Did those books really have to be that long? I mean, it seemed like Meyer just rambled about nothing for a hundred pages and ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Ther Series of Unfortunate Events

    Haha, I actually really liked these. But, I read all of them so long ago I can barely remember them. I just know I liked them and my favorite person ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: 19 minutes by Jodi Picoult

    Ooh! I love that book! I just finished it awhile ago. It was really good. I agree with KailaMarie though, I really liked My Sister's Keeper, if you haven't read ...

    May 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Elyse Heights ยป Book 1: Chapter I

    Hey. I really want to review this, but I don't have time right now. Do you mind if I do it tomorrow? I promise I'll get to it. But, I ...

    Apr 30, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: I've Got Your Picture *One*

    Hey, this was pretty good. I'm an ATL addict, so I had to read it. :) (Going to see them in concert soon, pretty fun.) This was well written, I ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Diary Of A Tenage Disaster 2

    Hey, I think Dudette got most of the grammar problems and I agree with them all. This was very interesting and I want to keep reading. Your MC is very ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: chase chapter 1

    Hey, this is pretty good and sorry, I'm way to tired to do a full review. I promise I'll try later. This is nice, and I like the way you ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: After Words: Intro

    Hey! I liked this a lot. Everybody did the grammar stuff so I won't do that. Good job and PM me if you add more.

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: House 3

    Hey, I just wanted to tell you this is very interesting. I'm writing a similar story now. I don't see a lot of grammar errors so I'll leave it to ...

    Apr 3, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why?

    I thought this was a nice peice and it was written well. As asxz said, some of the questions could be answered with science. They weren't complete mysteries. I think ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Realizing Somehting About Love

    I think it's kind of a poem. If it were a story it would be seperated into paragraphs, right? Well, it's pretty good and welcome to YWS.

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Breakdown Chapter One Part One.

    Thanks so much! You helped much. It does seem kind of boring huh? I'll fix it up. Thanks!

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A New Life (edited)

    Me again. Yay, you must be excited. I just wanted to say that I like this version better. Good Work! Keep writing!

    Feb 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: For The Girls Chapter Five

    hey! I read your whole series and I had no clue Keith was such a jerk! Good luck and keep writing. PM me if you add more please?

    Feb 24, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What are some good books to read?

    The Private Novels by Kate Brian. Oh my god they have everything, romance, murder, mystery. They rock, (better then Twilight. Oh my god don't shoot me.) Which don't get me ...

    Feb 21, 2009


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind