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Re: Twilight
I just want to say something. Did those books really have to be that long? I mean, it seemed like Meyer just rambled about nothing for a hundred pages and ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Ther Series of Unfortunate Events
Haha, I actually really liked these. But, I read all of them so long ago I can barely remember them. I just know I liked them and my favorite person ...
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: 19 minutes by Jodi Picoult
Ooh! I love that book! I just finished it awhile ago. It was really good. I agree with KailaMarie though, I really liked My Sister's Keeper, if you haven't read ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Elyse Heights ยป Book 1: Chapter I
Hey. I really want to review this, but I don't have time right now. Do you mind if I do it tomorrow? I promise I'll get to it. But, I ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: I've Got Your Picture *One*
Hey, this was pretty good. I'm an ATL addict, so I had to read it. :) (Going to see them in concert soon, pretty fun.) This was well written, I ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Tenage Disaster 2
Hey, I think Dudette got most of the grammar problems and I agree with them all. This was very interesting and I want to keep reading. Your MC is very ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: chase chapter 1
Hey, this is pretty good and sorry, I'm way to tired to do a full review. I promise I'll try later. This is nice, and I like the way you ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: After Words: Intro
Hey! I liked this a lot. Everybody did the grammar stuff so I won't do that. Good job and PM me if you add more.
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: House 3
Hey, I just wanted to tell you this is very interesting. I'm writing a similar story now. I don't see a lot of grammar errors so I'll leave it to ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Why?
I thought this was a nice peice and it was written well. As asxz said, some of the questions could be answered with science. They weren't complete mysteries. I think ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Realizing Somehting About Love
I think it's kind of a poem. If it were a story it would be seperated into paragraphs, right? Well, it's pretty good and welcome to YWS.
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Breakdown Chapter One Part One.
Thanks so much! You helped much. It does seem kind of boring huh? I'll fix it up. Thanks!
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: A New Life (edited)
Me again. Yay, you must be excited. I just wanted to say that I like this version better. Good Work! Keep writing!
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: For The Girls Chapter Five
hey! I read your whole series and I had no clue Keith was such a jerk! Good luck and keep writing. PM me if you add more please?
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: What are some good books to read?
The Private Novels by Kate Brian. Oh my god they have everything, romance, murder, mystery. They rock, (better then Twilight. Oh my god don't shoot me.) Which don't get me ...
Feb 21, 2009
