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  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Miss You

    I don't know when you posted this but it might've been awhile ago, but I'm still going to review it. Love this! You review mine, I review yours. This was ...

    Feb 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1: **First Edit**

    Okay, I think everyone covered all the grammar and to be perfectly honest grammar isn't my strong point. :) So, onto my review. I read the non-edited version and this ...

    Feb 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Shades of death

    Hey! I just wanted to say that this was really good! Grammar is not my strong point so I'm not even going to go into that because I might say ...

    Feb 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 3

    Hey! I was browsing some of the forums and I don't know. I just decided to read yours. I don't really have time to do a full review but I ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Arriere Pensee Chapter 3

    Yay I'm back for the next part. So, anyways... I turned my head and stared in awe out of the half inch thick deeply [s]tented[/s] tinted windows. Montverde Academy, looked ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: 13 and 8 left.... Chapter 9

    Hey this was really good! I'm not in the mood to do a long review but I just though I'd tell you it was good. Also, I must remind you, ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Well, mine isn't too well known but it was called North of Beautiful. I guess it was okay, but it's the only book that I think was bad/boring that I ...

    Feb 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dangerous Type

    I really liked this! I like the idea that he killed her and now she's back and he tells himself that she's dead, it adds great a good effect. So ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: What one remembers... #1

    Okay, this is one of the few reviews I will be doing today. I don't like to see zero replies :lol:. One [s]dose [/s] does not know . I don't ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Afraid to Die

    Okay, I really liked this! So just a few things, I'm not a big grammar freak so I'm not going to do any of that. Characters: I know what he/she ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Arriere Pensee Chapter 2

    Okay, this was good. So onto the review... I jumped up [s]freighted[/s] frightened by the noise, but then I quickly remembered it was my school alarm. I went to my ...

    Feb 18, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Llama Boy

    I liked this, honestly I did. But, I think it would be better if Jesse took Mrs. Hamilton's place and could talk to Rylee. I don't know why, but since ...

    Feb 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Finding You, part 4

    Okay, I'm ready to review this now. I'm not too much of a grammar freak but I'll show a few things. “You look amazing” he said smiling at her. Comma ...

    Feb 17, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer

    I was cracking up at my house and everyone thought I was crazed. I love the books but that was funny when Bella was like "You shot me," and he ...

    Feb 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Finding You

    Hey, I really liked this! It was a great plot, and I wished it was longer. So...onto the review. She said to the little blonde hair blue eyed girl. It ...

    Feb 15, 2009


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