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I was really down today so I read your poam. I started cracking up. It was so funny! The part about how you didn't take your medication made me laugh ...

that was a really cool song!! i really liked it and I think you should write more because you have obvious talent at songwriting. It's funny because I could never, ...

That was really good. I like your writing style and the words you use. I wish that maybe you could've desribed the school maybe a bit more. Rose seems like ...

I thought it was really good and interesting. You're a good writer and you use good descriptive words. It's much better then anything I could do. Good job and keep ...

I liked that story. It kept my interest the whole time, unlike others I have read. The description of the girl was great when you were talking about how her ...

I agree with PippieDooda you could elaborate on how the shop looks inside. That would add more interest. So far it's really good. Keep it up I'm interested. :D