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Prolouge of Life as We Knew It (edited)
This is a prologue to a story I'm writing. I just wanted to see if anybody found it at all interesting. Please comment if you wish. So read on... (by ...
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Positive (Edited) about a teen with HIV
This is my story "Positive" it is edited with more detail. I'm always looking to improve so tell me what to improve. ------------------------------------------------------------- I opened my eyes slow
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Positive Chapter Two (edited)
This is edited. If you didn't read the first one you should consider it because it does give some of the plot and storyline. If you don't feel like reading ...
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Positive (3) edited slightly different.
Okay so this is the third part of my story, or I guess it would be probably the start of Chapter Two if it were in book form. So I ...
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Without You. *Edited.*
New story, please comment, I would like to improve it. It's just an idea got it off the show I watched about poor kids in the Appalachian mountains That morning ...
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Without You. Chapter one part two.
This is kind of long. But, I have a few chapters of it written on my computer so I had to find a good part to stop that it wouldn't ...
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In Paradise...
Okay, so this is a newer story of mine. It is kind of long but I have quite a bit of it of my computer and I wanted to end ...
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In Paradise...(Chapter one part two)
This is the next little section of my story. It's short because if I put anymore and tried to end the part on a good spot it would be way ...
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Breakdown-Prologue. First Edit
I can't seem to stick with one idea. I'm not done with "Another Sunset," but this idea popped into my head and I had to write it down so... People ...
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Breakdown Chapter One Part One.
Thanks for all the reviews on the prologue. I've worked on this next part for the past few days so review it please! That morning I was more nervous then ...