mermaidgal

Hi! I really enjoyed your story and the abrupt ending I thought was exciting. However, starting from your title, I thought it could have been different. ¨Why won't it end¨ ...

This poem was extremely raw and honest, which made me love it. I like the inclusion of the absence of your father and how your grandfather was in your life. ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It is very emotional and easy to relate to. I want to kiss you I want to hold your hand I want to dance with ...

Hi there! Your story was really interesting and kept me wanting to read. However, the main thing I noticed was grammar problems. From the context of your story I could ...

Hi! I really liked this short story. Your title caught my attention right away and I was curious to know where she was going or what was happening. I almost ...

Okay first of all, before I go into the story, I found it really really great. I kept waiting for the unexpected twist because I just knew there had to ...