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Hey, Pinkratgirl! So I should say that this story was well-planned out. Although, I really have no idea how this narrator looks like. I have a pretty hard time imagining ...

Hey, thundereagle! So, as a bassoonist, I totally understand the band jokes that were popped into the piece from here to there! It gave me a good laugh. I'll just ...

Hey AMDDOG! I have to admit, it's my first time reading one of your works. And I can see a potential for great growth in your writing, and I'd love ...

Hey, Deanie! Well, wow, this was really amazing. I loved the structure of the poem; how it went from poet, writer, then reader. There was no real grammar errors that ...

Hey, DriftingPulp! So, I thought that this was really deep. It treats a topic that not a lot of people write poetry about. So a very nice job on that! ...

Hello, Pendr! Oh, god. Before I say this, please note that I'm not mentally ill or a psycho. Nope. Absolutely not. Anyway... Oh, god. I LOVE stories about suicide. Like, ...

Hey, Brittlebird! So I see you're new to YWS! Awesome! I'm saying that because your poem is very, very good. I don't see any grammar errors, except for one thing. ...

Hello, summeremowrite! I really liked the last line. It shows how that person loves the 'you' in the poem very, very well. But a couple nitpicks to go over. Haha, ...

Hey, DrFeelGood! So, well, I really liked this poem, a lot. It accurately described real life without, you know, being overly dramatic and sounding like you really want to describe ...

Hey, FancyDragon. So, wow, ummmm.... This made me really sad. It was amazing. Its formatting was very unique. This is the first time I've seen a poem like this actually ...

Hey wasabi! First of all, I would like to say that you have a very nice beginning. But the ending seems kind of... unfinished. It leaves a bunch of different ...

Hey Burrow! So I understand that this is your first shot at this kind of genre, yes? It was really good. I mean it. I still remember the time I ...

Hey kingofeli! So, this was a very awesome plot outline. I know a lot of people who love reading about gangs *cough* me *cough*. One thing that you will really, ...

Hey joallover! This was a really great poem. Exactly what I think every Christmas. There's more to it than just buying pretty stuff with money! (That's why my family doesn't ...

Hey, Blackwood and Strangelove! First, some points to make about this : One. Racist alert. [...and also promote a healthy, white, heterosexual society.] Ummmmmm, don't know if my eye is ...