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Re: Hope
Good day! I really liked it...but in my opinion it much better if it's in poem form or anything. Or articles. It's not much of a story...more of a...poem. But ...
May 8, 2013 -
Re: Scattered mind
Hello! I really liked your poem, being related to it, actually. But stanzas can make it look...cleaner? Like: My mind was scattered Like leaves in autumn And nobody was there ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Sea Side Memories
Hello! I liked the main concept. But the story was quite confusing by the third (If you overlooked He's gone) paragraph. Who is "he", exactly? Maybe a bit more description ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Prom
Hello! I really like the story plot, characters and all! But maybe, there too many "super, duper's". Maybe, Blake Jordan need a bit more description because he's the main squeeze ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Prearranged...
Hello stephyethier22! MemybooksandI for review here! I just wanted to say I love your story here! The characters were realistic, and so does the twist and turns of the story. ...
Apr 28, 2013