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Whups. I thought about your comment some more and realize what you meant. Thank you for the advice.

It was rated 18 ;)

:/ I don't think I *did* say the queen wore the veil. When I'm editing I'll keep an eye out for that impression and cut it out. Thank you for ...

Thank you~ the lines you pointed oit gave me trouble. I'll keep working on it. Your review was great!

I'm sorry for the double post XP

Hey fort~ Let's see if I can help you out. o.o This was fantastic. I mean... You started out funny, and then you went to this horror vibe, and I'm ...

:/ I reviewed half of it anyways

XD Sometimes we do things because we feel like it. Yeah, I got the abstract part XD Though abstract poetry is definitely not my forte, I can appreciate it, and ...

Whups. tgirly beat me to the bold question.

I don't like it either :/ Let me think on it, and I'll let you know.

Oops. The p's should be in like the br's are, not brackets.

Aw :/ That formatting didn't seem to work. Perhaps put each around each stanza. Like: [p]I remember, When my teachers told me, That I was as cute as can be, ...

I understand that not wanting to use the same word, but my problem is I *knew* that's what you were trying to do. It can be really hard, but when ...

I have nothing to add that the other reviewers haven't already covered though I definitely agree with them.

Hey, don't worry about it. Every writer has been there before :)