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Thanks for the reply. The teacher actually gave me three topics I had to follow in three different paragraphs and then told me what my conclusion had to be... So ...

The summary is great. I don't mean to ge repeating things. I'm sorry if I come off as annoying.

Thanks for your post, guys. Just as a heads up, I plan to go into more description on the characters at a later chapter. I'll try to do that soon.

I tried to follow people's advice but I may have just made it worse. Any criticism won't hurt my feelings.

Thanks for the post. I'll keep that in mind. Honestly, I'm not very good at action scenes. I'm better at developing personalities.

Thank you. I've actually never heard that before but I was trying something new. Now I know what not to do.

Hey, That was cool... and weird. I thought the main character was a little too mature for for a teenager that has just been given the responsibility of a mother. ...

Thanks for the reviews. This gives me a boost of confidence. My first post was a bit of a fluke.

It was interesting. There was a rhythm to your sentences that I thought seemed kind of odd in a prose. Maybe try poetry if that's how you write normally. A ...

Honestly, I lost interest halfway through. If you could shorten it it would be better.

I liked this and have read the second one which I liked as well. Your good at what you do but could you eventually bring the hit-man back into the ...

Thanks for the post. I'm new and trying to dip my toes in the water. Maybe I should just jump in.

This story confused me. I liked the idea but wasn't sure of the meaning. If you could go into more detail on Eric's relationship with his mother and the man ...

I would have liked to know the characters more. The concept I liked. The personality you showed of your characters I liked and I liked the conflict but it seemed ...

I liked it a lot. Changing the words up would be great. I think the meaning is the most important thing though and I think what you've said is very ...