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Just to clear up some confusion, I don't think you should have ended any differently. It's just... It's kind of sad it had to end the way it did. This ...

Thanks all reviewers, If you don't want points, I'm not going to give them to you. It's more to get more people to read this than for you dedicated readers. ...

Umm... Thanks everyone for a review. If anyone could give me examples where I could reword sentences, I'll try. I think every author has a problem seeing their own mistakes, ...

Jai, Thank you for the review. Thanks all of you guys really. It's great. I didn't even have to ask for the second review, which is great, so thanks a ...

I did a little research. Nouns ending in s, z, ch, sh, and x Nouns with these letters at the end call for an "es" in the plural form. This ...

Hey guys, Thanks for all the great reviews. In reply to everything you guys have written, I'm going to say that if I went into detail on why they were ...

This is a great idea. You don't have enough points, but this would be a good storybook topic. There's not much I can review on. I was still thinking about ...

Hey guys, Thank you for the reviews. They are a great help, and I hope you guys can keep on doing so. I've gotten a lot of questions on Grayson, ...

Hey, I'm here to review this agian. I'm glad you liked my review. I just... Wow. The first thing I thought, honestly, was 'Oh no, here we go. Another ghost ...

I'm glad to help. I've made the same mistakes.

Hey, I wanted to tell you your edited version is much better. I thought you would like some more feedback on your new version. I don't have much more to ...

This was better. I'm glad my review helped. One little thing. I can't help it! Scrambled is spelled wrong. Megsug.

This was a bad chapter. The real chapter three is better.

Thanks for the reviews. Yeah... Grim is kind of cliched. I'll try to fill him out a bit. He was supposed to just appear though. Maybe that doesn't work. I'll ...

Thanks for the all the reviews. I get what you're saying about the emotions, but I kind of wanted to portray her being trapped in the relationship. I'll try to ...