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I'm not arguing against having a slow novel. I write novels that have a largely political focus. They're not the most exciting, action-based novels, and they're not "fast." But slow ...

Thanks for the review. I'm kinda mortified that someone is telling me about racial stereotypes. That's something I try to be on top of >.< This is an older project ...

Well, I didn't really have an opinion of Caius until recently because he was just referred to or the scenes with him were short and lacking in characterization (mostly because ...

I guess I kind of understand that, but I don't see why she needed to visit her old life. Her thoughts and logic don't explain it, and while Eric may ...

Hey geoffles! Thanks for the review! I'm not going to devour you. Your opinion is very valid, and I posted this for critiques. I definitely see what you're saying there, ...

Sorry I never got around to replying to that. I completely understand as far as characters writing themselves. My characters always seem very... turbulent in my rough drafts. As far ...

School has been crazy. I'm sorry I'm being so slow ;n; Are you still working on this project? Is it still helpful for me to read through it?

I don't think that what you're saying the reader gets from the flashback warrants having it where it does. There's not much gain for so much distraction there. Her working ...

I will keep reading~ Mmm... I still don't agree with you. I don't think that's incentive to read on. It's just confusing. That's okay~

I'm sorry if I implied that your long replies aren't good. That wasn't my intention. I don't need Evie to relate to me specifically. I don't relate to Lestat at ...

Well... I like Eric too, but I meant Michael. XD My bad! So, I don't care if Evie is good or bad. She's your character. The problem I think I ...

Ahh. This makes more sense. Though she's been with him for a century. And where is Caius' mentor then? Just a question. As you said, this is only chapter one, ...

Ah... I'll try to make the transition between lust and anger a little more distinct. Thanks!

Nitpicks don't necessarily make a good review ;) Thanks~

What surprised you? Thanks for the review!