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Hey! This for Big Review and running late! Sorry about that >.> My favorite bit of this poem is probably the Cinderella stanza and the one right after it... Stanza ...

Heyo~ I'm here for the Big Review. I'm sorry for being late >.> I love the boy who keeps repeating "He fell from the sky." That character adds a nice ...

Heyo~ This is for the Big Review. Trying to find something to review for you is very challenging! I haven't read any of your previous chapters, but I'll try to ...

Hey Wolf~ This for Big Review~ Thanks for the tag. It makes choosing what to review a lot easier. After Ark's fantastic review, I'm going to go in a little ...

Hey Tuesday~ Here for the Big Review. I'm going to focus on the larger picture since you have two nitpick reviews. I've always been fond of this style of introduction, ...

Hey pretz~ Popping in for the Big Review. I see your other reviewers have covered grammar, so I'm going to try to cover a few other things. I really love ...

Hey Tuesday~ I thought I'd go ahead and give this poem a shot for The Big Review contest. I think imagery is one of the most powerful devices that can ...

Hey Megrim! I'm here to review for the Big Review contest. You've definitely got an action packed chapter here. I think your pacing is pretty good. I don't feel like ...

Hey Pheonix~ Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about the site or just want a friend, feel free to PM me or post on my wall. Dark shadow ...

Hey storm~ Finally finished up with you! I'm sorry for the long wait. I have no idea what's going on since this is chapter 22, but you have certainly thrown ...

Hey Storm~ I've read through the other reviews, so I'll try not to repeat. I absolutely adore the glimpse you gave us of Mr. Starr. I think the man is ...

Hey Storm~ I've skimmed through the other reviews, so I'll try to keep things fresh. This Token thing looks like trouble. The paragraph you used to describe what was happening ...

Hey R2, I've skimmed through the other reviews. I'll try not to repeat anything. I'm going to break this review into chapters, so I can actually focus on things. Sorry ...

Dracula, I'm so sorry ;n; This review has been so long in coming, but I'm finally here. Haha! There are a bunch of reviews, but I'm skimming through them. Sorry ...

Hey Storm~ Here for round two. Sorry for the atrocious wait. I'm so slow xP Alright. You definitely really know your world! It is interesting to see exactly what kind ...