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Hey, I didn't read the other chapters, but I understood most of it... I think. I enjoyed this chapter thoroughly. There are a few things... okay, more than a few... ...

Hey, I needed something to review and saw this. I must admit, I was a bit confused, but the second part of chapter one cleared things up... sort of. I'll ...

Hey Snoink! I thought this was great. I found a few typos, so I'm going to point them out like you said, but other than that, you did a great ...

Hey Storygirl, The story was nice. It has a good main character. I looked up both Boothbay Harbor and Portland. You've chosen very beautiful settings. In 1996 ten babies apeared ...

Hi Deadends, I'm a fan of historical fiction and World War Two. I like how you start on the homefront, since so many people write about the battle and the ...

Hey, I was intruiged, but you didn't lead up to anything. I liked the character and how she cared enough to tell someone else about it but didn't feel moved ...

Hi MoonlightAssassin, I hope you enjoyed your first week at YWS, or at least by my calender, you've been here a week. I'm kind of wondering why you didn't just ...

Hey Moderncalypso, Welcome to YWS. I liked the idea. It seems like you've done your research on Greek mythology and have a handle on it. I would explain some of ...

Hey Broken, Welcome to YWS. This story was really good. I couldn't write this good when I was your age. I'm going to go ahead with the review. There isn't ...

You certainly have a story here. I'm not sure, however, that it should have been posted as a literary piece. It almost sounds like a blog entry, so maybe you ...

Hey Tm, I'm interested in WWII and liked your telling of it. If you need to do any research, I found this Time article on the parachuters of Normandy that ...

Hey, I wanted to say your edited version of chapter one is better. Chapter two has many of the same characteristics of chapter one. It's almost like we're still being ...

Hey Time8keeper, I liked the hook at the very beginning. This definetly makes me want to read the rest of your novel. The way your prolouge is vague, but still ...

Hey Charlii, I liked this. There were a few grammar mistakes you kept repeating like: Kirsty sat on the sofa, her mum had her head back with a facial mask ...

This was interesting. I liked the irony. I was eternally trapped in a four-year-olds bedroom. Ha ha. I tapped my fingers against the glass and frowned slightly. It was a ...