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Hey, I'm here to review that story that was left on my counter mysteriously. This was very good. Normally I don't like sad endings. I like the pot of gold ...

Here I am to review. Okay, it's very well paced. You did a great job. They saunter on in, long before the first signs of daylight, after a night that ...

Hey, I think this was my favorite chapter as of yet. I'm getting to know the characters as they are. Other than Kiada and Jared the others seem to be ...

Hey, I'm here to give you the review you wanted. First of all this is a great concept. A girl who has just got through all this drama with some ...

Hey, Pointe. There was some irony to this, and I might just be making it up, but I liked it anyway. I couldn't find much, though there were a few ...

Hey, I want to thank you for the reviews you've given me. They were great as was this chapter. It really threw me for a loop. I had to read ...

Hey, Things are really getting interesting. I think, in this chapter, you need to work on character development. I got confused with all the characters, though you have given most ...

Hey Eternity, Welcome to YWS. Thanks for the review you gave me. Wow. This was... great. It was very moving. All I can tell you to do is reread this ...

Hey Giselle, Welcome to YWS. This was really good for a first chapter. There were a few things I caught, but they're small. I couldnt stand being hit another time. ...

Hi Storyweaver, I was intruiged by this story. I liked your setting. I've always loved the idea of a small town, as I live in suburbia, and the way you ...

Hey Deadends, I feel like I'm kind of stalking you now, since I just finished one of your reviews, but what can I say. I like pirates. :pirate2: Anyway, as ...

Hey Deadends, I didn't think you needed a preface, but this is cool, I suppose. There are a few things that don't match up historically. If Stanely was five when ...

Hey Moonlight I thought it was good. I liked the main character. I felt like he was realistic. The only thing I can point out that the other reviewer hasn't, ...

Hey emmily, I'm sorry it took so long for me to review this. Biology is a killer. Anyway, I liked it. The dialouge isn't very realistic. I think part of ...

Hey, Your grammar has improved a lot. I would have review this before now, but I just realized you had posted it so... yeah. Personally, and I'm sorry to give ...