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Hey Clarity, Here on request. You already have several reviews, so I'm going to focus on the 'flow' because most everyone has covered the nitpicks. As such, a great number ...

Hello Ah, I'm going to read through and point out what I see, then give a wrap up which will include some good things, I promise. It’s raining outside and ...

Hello Hen, If my girl Neva likes it, I'll have to give it a try. ;) in which it was supposed to be engaging in the death bed, This is ...

And here we go for one last push. I will tell you now, that I have greatly enjoyed reading your four chapters today, and expect others soon. ;) I was ...

I'll begin with the hopes of finishing, but I may have to finish tomorrow. I apologize if I repeat Disk. His review was a bit too painful for me to ...

Onto chapter one! So, I like this addition of the water cave. Very interesting development. We learn a lot about Regan here which is always nice. I had a cut ...

Hey there Pahoem, Here as requested. I apologize for the wait. I had family gatherings for the holidays. I will also apologize now if I repeat anything the other reviewers ...

Hey Pucker Thanks for requesting a review. :) I loved your review. I found it charming, almost as if you were really telling the story to a child, and the ...

Hey Phillip! I can see your fairly new, so I'm just going to extend a word of welcome and you may imagine my virtual hand shaking your virtual hand if ...

Hey, Chances I'm going to review your piece! I'm just going to jump in. First, the first paragraph is WAY too long. I would break this in several places. We ...

Hey there, Boy, I'm glad you decided to come back! This was beautiful as always. I know I didn't have to leave a review, but... I can't help myself. :D ...

Hello again, Part Duex! I'm going to skip the niceties and dive in. He spent a moment deciding whether he would enjoy a bowl of cereal or a Caesar salad. ...

Hey Neva! Here to review as you asked. This was fantastic. You warned me that it was dark, and you didn't disappoint. So, the important thing in any and everything ...

Hey Florence, First, Welcome to YWS. I certainly hope you enjoy yourself here and decide to frequent often. Second, Please forgive the formatting. It's the result of pasting. I know ...

Hey! I'm afraid I'm even more appalling than Twit! But here I finally am. First of all, I love Myrond. He's a good character. Skipping the hated pleasantries, I shall ...