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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Red That We See

    hey zenith, the first thing which i would like to say is the unique topic which you chose is awesome. The gradual illustration of how the blood can influence your ...

    Nov 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Culture Re: I love you. I like you.

    hi TheMulticoloredCyr, truly speaking the story was heart touching. Use of such adorable language to express the romance was purely great. I liked the innocence with which ruby expressed her ...

    Mar 10, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Hide and Seek

    hi CHICKENCURRY, I just wanted to point out few things about your short story. I loved the end of the story where you beautifully described the reality of her fear ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: The Unbearable Stillness

    hi YGK55, Your story appeared to me just like a snapshot or a glimpse of life which I never tried to imagine.You illustrated a world which was never familiar to ...

    Jan 21, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: The Tale of Broken Sea

    I would love to enlist all the aspects in this poem line by line. For the first line , the contrast between the capabilities and present scenario of powerful gale ...

    Jan 19, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The rabbit and the tortoise

    Mainly talking about the plot,I loved it.The way in which old and profound version of story which almost everybody knew,was put the extreme extent of imagination was admirable.But as I ...

    Jan 19, 2019


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