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Hey there B, Thanks for your review of this poem! To answer your question: I wrote this based on actual events, so the line "You close your arms around me ...

You got it. :)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your time, this helps a lot. :)

Thank you!

I can try to shed some light, absolutely... "Bestowed on me by myself" sounds aurally clunky. It doesn't read or roll off the tongue with as much grace as you ...

Hi papillote, Thank you so much for the kind review. I thought a lot about your advice, and concede that you are right. Your final remarks, "sometimes you have it ...

Hello Jurelixranoanad, Thank you so much for the kind review/not review. I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece, and appreciate the encouragement! Hope you have a wonderful summer as well. ...

Any time, ShaeSnow! I'm glad you appreciate the difference between honesty and criticism, because you do create beautiful (read: not rusty!) work. Looking forward to seeing how this piece progresses! ...

Hello Homachi, Thank you for your kind review. I really appreciate your thoughts. And as for your wondering... Thanks again, Mav

Thanks for the kind review, papillote! So glad you enjoyed it. I plan to write a second piece, detailing how my protagonist (*cough cough* I) handled the break up scene, ...

Thank you for the kind review, chaussettes. So glad you enjoyed this piece! :) -Mav

Thank you for the kind review VegasLights! :) -Mav

Thanks for your thoughts, beccalicious94! :) -Mav

Thanks for your thoughts, Thisislegacy! :) -Mav

Thank you DragonNoir! Really appreciate your thoughts. :) -Mav