marwa

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Thank for the critique .Also I want you to know that is the first poem I wrote and honestly I don't have any experience I'm just a little beginner who ...

Thank you so much for giving me your opinion because this is important for a beginner like me :)

Thank you for the critique and thank you for reading my poem :) !

Thank you so much :)

Thank for giving me your opinion ; that is really important for me .Yes I try to use the rhyme :)

Thank you so much :)

Thank you for reading my poem and for your tips :) I will keep writing ! :)

Thank you for the critique and your tips :)

I love it ! Good :) !

it is a lovely poem