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Re: The Brotherhood
hello i am marv and i will be reviewing your piece today! for one you need a space on the last line where its says "on averylong journey" a space ...
Mar 21, 2013 -
Re: ever-shifting waves
I really like this poem. So what is this really about? I cant really tell. is it about a crush or something else? But all in all this is a ...
Mar 21, 2013 -
Re: Losing dignity
no that snever happened
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: The Beast
So what is this beast? is it real or fiction.you dont have to come out and say it but put in hints so the reader will know what is on ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: The apprentice
thabk you i might make a series of this but i dont know
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: The apprentice
this is my first peice and the thought came to me and i had to get it down
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Something About You
Review so i can really relate to this and writing especially poetry should be.The rhythm is great and the topic even better. bu you did repaet the last two lines ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Locked in a Hall of Broken Mirrors
Review This is a really good poem about not trying to fit in
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Love Is Like Math
I really like this is nice
Mar 20, 2013