marshmellow-warrior

I thought this piece was good But in the beginning I wasn't certain what it was that you were talking about. 'We crossed a line' If your talking about a ...

Awe ! Bailey ! i love your poetry, i seriously do. there's nothing edit about this poem. cause it's just plain perfect, and there couldn't possibly be anything else for ...

Although you warned me not to read this at school, well i just couldnt resist. Your writing daws me in. And well this one in particular was alot of potential. ...

aw he, bailey, iloveyou :) this is soo sad, and it's so good. it really makes you think, ALOT. The words fit perfectly, and your such a good poet ! ...

hi Kira ! :) well, I'm wondering who this poem is about ???? your boyfriend ?

That... was beyond wonderful. The words flowed perfectly, everything made sense. And i swear, i could cry because of this poem. Since its based on a true story, it makes ...

And how it's taste can melt The coldest place in your soul no capital on "the". It's worth it's wait in gold. I don't really understand that part, did you ...

Hello there, Hun ! :D I just wanted to read something of yours. Since you reviewed my work, I'd be more than happy to return the favor. There were some ...

ha ha! i think I'm going to melt into tears.. tears of LAUGHTER ! Wow, this was such a good script, and non-threatening towards me. Though i couldn't picture Carlisle ...

I thought it was really good, well.. Great actually. Its quite interesting, If you kept writing it, it could become something more than great. Everyone seems to have covered pretty ...

Well, Bailey ! Hi ! :) I remember reading this story on your laptop, and i really enjoyed it. I think your story has a lot of potential, and after ...

Well, I'm pretty sure everyone below me covered everything, so ill just tell you how much i loved your story :) I thought it was good, wonderful even, if you ...

your story is good, there are some mistakes here and there, but i think our good friend above me has pointed them out. So now, all there's left for me ...

Hey, i know you friend :) i thought it was good, a few spelling mistakes here and there and a few words that you randomly made up.. But other than ...