maroonamorous

Uh oh ! It's funny, but I actually never happened to notice those errors. :/ I promise, from the very next time, I will go through my work over and ...

Is it alright now?

Oh so YOU reviewed!! Yay!! Ok. I don't know but I really like reading all your stuff, and though I have many but you are one of my favourite YWSer. ...

Oh well thank you! You're very kind :)

Ohh, now knowing that 'does' makes me like this poem even more. ...and you cook? Oh my! Now I like 'you' even more. You're a darling Laure, know that! ~MarS

Oh why, oh why, you are just 14 and you write poems that THRILLS my heart and cause Goosebumps all over my body ???!!! Ahem! Anyways, you're great, just GREAT. ...

Thank you for the suggestion, I am glad that you were honest with what you liked and what you didn't. But I think I am going to keep this the ...

Well I tried singing it, and it turned out to sound fine like that. But ok, thank you, like always, AlexSushiDog !! thanks for reviewing my friend :)

Oh dear, this was literally beautiful :') I can not describe it in words, 'cause it's way too perfect. I'm speechless. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's definitely ...

Oh thank you dear. i'm glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas !!!

Oh yeah, I missed that 'is', so I just corrected that. No, no flaw is negligible, it's good you mentioned it. Thanks very much!! Merry Christmas, you too ^_^

I believe in it, that god love those who love everybody. Since it's a school-project that too for a primary student, so I tried my best to deliver a message ...

Aww, thanks and you too friend ^_^

Haha I know I made a lot of mistakes there but I wanted to keep it short and simple because afterall it was supposed to be a 5yr old's project. ...

And you are 15?! And you are preventing me who'll turn 18 next year from reading this?? Well since this work was rated 18+, honestly I didn't read it. Anyways ...