markvd

I loved your word choice:) excellent vocabulary. I especially liked "The topography of a smile." well done, I enjoyed it.

Thank you, your comments are very helpful.

I agree--a great piece. This is a subject we all deal with, and you presented it in a new and profound way. Keep up the good work

Very well written. I love how it is a sort of dissection of one's last moments, and a reflection of the life. It is painful, but as many writer's know--life ...

no, you would be correct in thinking so. It was just a nice way for me to encompass some of the feelings i have about life right now, the swift, ...

Yes, a bit cliche, but I did enjoy how you left the reader with hope at the end.