marie1larsen

This chapter adds a new feel to the story. It makes me wonder how Jorge is connected which adds mystery and suspense. It also makes me, the reader curious as ...

This prologue has been beautifully crafted. You have great skill in giving detail and you use a variety of wording for description, feeling, and action that is impressive. This story ...

Hey! Here is a review for your story! My corrections are in parenthesis () Your sentence: I think that all of my strength is back,” Asha huffed. My correction: I ...

Hey! Here is my review. The details in the story are really good! I like this story:) The corrections I made are shown in parenthesis () Your sentence: Amber’s first ...

Hey! Here are corrections to your Chapter 4.2! Great story by the way!:) My corrections are done in parenthesis! () Your sentence: "Who are you?" demanded Jonah as he tried ...

Hey! So here are some of my corrections of your really awesome story, "No Time to Rest" Your sentence: "Alert the knights!" Robin barked."Archers take your places! Solders arm yourself." ...

Nice story! The suspense and feel of it is really interesting and fun to read! Here is my review, "I put my hand to the door of one of the ...

This story is very well created! You are doing fabulous! I am enjoying it. The issues that I can see are very simple to fix: A spelling mistake with recognise ...

This is a beautiful short story. The rose is making sense of its surroundings, not realizing that the sky is giving it the light it needs. In my understanding, the ...

The corns enemies will pluck it and eat it, therefore he will in fact reach an end. The corn has no control over what happens to itself. The feeling in ...