mariahneu

Be easy on her... Although it's not a masterpiece of a poem, it's really touching and I can relate to it as my great-grandmother just went through the same thing. ...

The civil war is a topic that really intrigues me... I really loved the journal entries that you wrote, through the eyes of a nurse in the civil war. Very ...

This story was a little confusing for me to read... I would suggest leaving one space between each new paragraph, for the sake of the reader. There are a lot ...

Very nice. :D I actually wrote something like this a few days ago, but it was more of an essay than a poetry called "True Poetry". I think I'll post ...

I really liked this poem; very descriptive and I loved that you made it into a "shape poem". However, I would center the poem so that it looks more like ...

I give you applause for having the courage to write a piece about the terror of math. Oh, how I hate math, and I can relate in so many ways... ...

I really loved the word play and such in your poem. "my stomach twirling, Dancing the Salsa". The wording is so much better than just saying that you have butterflies ...

Just a note: Crysi, I may submit this, so look at your own peril (she's an editor of the school lit mag, see). She was a dancing girl. One of ...