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margrite

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Summer Vacation

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    looked out my window and felt. the warm wind coming at me from the lake. I heard the water. crashing up onto the beach where my cousins were already building ...

    Feb 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Literature Re: The Cause

    You put in words so well a very hurtful experience that sadly many people go through. The sentences: "I know I shouldn't be so afraid" And: "It was only one ...

    Feb 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Literature Re: You

    Wow. I can feel the claustrophobia this person or voice or thing makes you feel. The built of your poem makes it even more powerful than it already is. The ...

    Feb 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I can't ever let go [does Aphrodite hate me?]

    This poem describes to beautifully a first love. The confusion yet the clearness of how real and all consuming this love is. You can feel by reading this the impact ...

    Feb 17, 2023
  • Other » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Part 1: Monte Escuro

    This is written so beautifully! It is written almost like through a child's eyes, but mature and with an incredible understanding of the world. It is also so mysterious and ...

    Oct 31, 2020


As my artist’s statement explains, my work is utterly incomprehensible and is therefore full of deep significance.
— Calvin