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Re: Summer Vacation
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Feb 17, 2023
looked out my window and felt. the warm wind coming at me from the lake. I heard the water. crashing up onto the beach where my cousins were already building ... -
Re: The Cause
You put in words so well a very hurtful experience that sadly many people go through. The sentences: "I know I shouldn't be so afraid" And: "It was only one ...
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Re: You
Wow. I can feel the claustrophobia this person or voice or thing makes you feel. The built of your poem makes it even more powerful than it already is. The ...
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Re: I can't ever let go [does Aphrodite hate me?]
This poem describes to beautifully a first love. The confusion yet the clearness of how real and all consuming this love is. You can feel by reading this the impact ...
Feb 17, 2023 -
Re: Part 1: Monte Escuro
This is written so beautifully! It is written almost like through a child's eyes, but mature and with an incredible understanding of the world. It is also so mysterious and ...
Oct 31, 2020
