manisha

i really loved the deep meaning and simplicity behind the poem. you ponder beautifully on an universal truth. "No words can replace a loved one No matter how we try, ...

its supposed to be a dream made into a story. Dreams dont take place in any time, do they? But thanks for the review! :) !

oh you think so? truthfully i was i hurry. i didnt actually work on it at all. but something is something. i think i will edit it to get in ...

i have edited the faulty parts. hope it makes it better now!

thanks for the reviews. thank you adriana. i think i should have added a few more commas. thanks for the help. and i made a pretty big mistake in the ...

truthfully i have no idea how you would change it. maybe change the whole idea of the stanza. maybe a diffrent flow with the first line. i am sorry. i ...

smilelikeyoumeanit oh you didnt understand it? hope i havent made it too confusing. it about two brothers who are lost in the woods. Deepest mysteries hidden deep Canopy of trees ...

love the bold use of the emotions. but the poem on the whole lacks a theme in certain. poetry is a form of expressing thoughts in the most elegant form. ...

hey.. love the bold expression of emotions.great job in getting across the character. could really connect with her. except the few mistakes it was a very sweet work. considering your ...