I’m sorry
What do those two words mean?
That you’re regretful, resentful, or don’t know what to do?
I think those two little words
As meaningful as they can be
Aren’t just enough for what we mean for them to be
I’m means I am
But what does sorry really and truly mean?
The dictionary says it means “full of sorrow” or “regret”
Is this the meaning we really and truly feel?
Or is this just words we throw around a lot?
With no meaning
No thought,
And just dish out a lot?
Or do we really and truly feel
The sorrow and regret deep in our heart?
Because I’m sorry doesn’t change it,
Or help with the damage deep down in your heart
What do you say then
When you really and truly feel?
I’m sorry is not really just enough for you to feel
So why not a , “Please forgive me ?”
Or an “ I really and truly understand your grief and sorrow”
No matter what we say,
even from the bottom of our heart
Can never really repair what was taken from your heart
Why say I’m Sorry ?
‘cause what if it really isn’t your fault?
No one tells you the grief on their part
That they themselves feel from the bottom of their heart
Your heart, their heart , the bottom of your heart
No words can replace a loved one
No matter how we try, we’ll never be able to understand
The way pain goes through a mourner’s heart
So even though these words are meaningless
They’ll just have to make do,
What others could I use?
So,
I’m sorry
I’m sorry
From the bottom of my heart.
I like it! It all flows together very nicely, like a stream, like those words were meant to be strung together. I agree, it could very easily become a song, you should consider turning it into a song.
So even though these words are meaningless
They’ll just have to make do,
What others could I use?
I like that paragraph specifically. Those words indeed can be meaningless if you use them too often and never change your actions.
I really like your poem, very meaningful.
The only thing I'd say you could change was giving it a bit more flow, but that's just my opinion, maybe you wrote it this way on purpose.
Was just thinking that this poem kind of reads like lyrics.. add a melody, change a few things and it would be an amazing song haha.
i really loved the deep meaning and simplicity behind the poem. you ponder beautifully on an universal truth.
"No words can replace a loved one
No matter how we try, we’ll never be able to understand
The way pain goes through a mourner’s heart"
i love this para.
even more i love the way you end it!
i am not good with reviewing poems but i can surely tell i loved this one!
congratulations!
-manisha
Thank you both for your reviews!