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Re: We are not alone
XD I put that there as in the next line he speaks about fingerprints.
Feb 4, 2015 -
Re: We are not alone
Thank you loads for the review! This was an entry for a contest and when it didn't get selected I could only see this short with doubts. Reading your review ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Center of Circle of Life
Thank you for the review! Apart from the other things you mentioned I agree that there is more than one message. That probably is a overload. This was forced writing ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Center of Circle of Life
Thank you for the review! Apart from the other things you mentioned I agree that there is more than one message. That probably is a overload. This was forced writing ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Center of Circle of Life
Thank you for this wonderful review! I have a big problem with run on sentences and you picked them out and explained how I could better them. That was really ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: We are not alone
Thank you!
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: We are not alone
Thank you for the comment :D
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: We are not alone
This review came at such a right time! It is exactly what I needed to hear but didn't know it. I understand when you say you aren't able to connect ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Paperboats are a child's dream
Thank you for the review! I wanted to use paper boats to show their age. But I guess I gave it significance by putting it in the title (which I ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Paperboats are a child's dream
I'm not a very strong poet to say I can help someone with it! But poetry just needs trying. Like any other writing. Thank you for the comment! :)
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Paperboats are a child's dream
Thank you!
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Farewell darling
Cheers! :)
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Farewell darling
Thank you!
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: maybe God will turn us into galaxies in heaven
When I saw the title I knew it was going to be yours! It is such pleasure reading your poems
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Final Destination Chapter 14 (Edited)
Ah makes sense now! :)
Jul 27, 2014