manisha

hi! i like the way you have brought out what heis going through (i am assuming its a male :)) . though i would have preferred a diffrent start. Don't ...

hi welcome to YWS i loved the story. you have a perfect flow, rather amazing for your age. love the creativity of the story. even the theme of being overimaginative. ...

hi enjoyed the read throughly! you have wonderful detail. [quoteShe was dressed in a long red gown with a slit up her leg, revealing her flawless skin. Her sleeves sat ...

it was a cute story. it brought the night alive. though you could work on your flow. I remember it all in graphic detail. We were sitting by the fire. ...

hi welcome to YWS loved the poem. it really brought ut the emotions beautifuly. great work. i really like the way you started the poem. Please don’t be angry, Mom, ...

it was a real good read. loved the display of every kind of emotions. you pulled it off really well. i still feel i miss something. or rather the story ...

i am the hugest harry potter fan. i think the story was done very well. though it feels like you have just interchanged the characters. neville in harry's place. neville ...

i loved it. it was totally alluring. love the way it was made dramatic. My best friend is myself. I am Loneliness. Some may mistake me for my brother, Despair ...

are you an artist? only a passionate artist can bring colours to life the way you have. being one myself i loved the poem! i very recently learnt that making ...

short yet completely beautiful. i really like the way the emotions are protrayed. love the title too. it really gives life to the story. Death. Here it was before her, ...

hi. i am not sure what the story was all about. i liked it until i came to the end and then..well.. the ending, what was supposed to happen there? ...

oh my god! i loved it. totally! it had me gripping all the while. It thrills me. Makes me feel alive. More alive than I've ever been you have way ...

hi. i am a serious fan of harry potter and it felt great reading a story connected to it. This South American village held a large quantity of magical beasts ...

hi. a rather creative piece. but has its own back drops. It stopped raining at the same moment I ended my son's life this doesnt make up to a very ...

i totally loved it! you have the knack of making reader read your work on and on! the way it begins, love it! Peace. you just coudn't have got a ...