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Hi there! Happy Review Day! manisha here to review towards Team Inc[red]ible. This was a great story which portrayed a madman's mind very well.(by mad man I mean someone who ...

Hey there! Happy Review day! Firstly, this was a great story. You have a beautiful style of writing. Your descriptions are great too. The picture has your signature on it? ...

Hi there! There isn't much to say as I found nothing to nitpick. I loved your description.Maybe this was a bit short for a short story but we can let ...

Hi there! Happy Review day! I love this! I read chapter one and had to read the next one. I love the idea of the doppelganger. It gives the right ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! manisha here to review. I had already read chapter one so I got the hang of what is happening here. I liked this. It makes ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! I really liked this. You have a nice flow and good description. I understand everything about your MC. About her interests. about her life, what ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day. I read chapter one and two and I dropped in here to read chapter three! I liked the start to this part. You described her ...

Hi there Kay! Happy review day. manisha here to review! I must say you have great writing skills. You keep your reader hooked and I read all the 4 chapters ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! I read part one and there you said this wasn't a fan fiction of Percy Jackson. But I find so much similarity. not only in ...

Hi there! This was a very good read. You have potential to be a great writer. You just have to make some changes here and there. The first thing I ...

Hi there! Happy review day! manisha here to review. This was a good story. You have painted your version of heaven and how it works with the angels and all. ...

Hi there! manisha here to review. This was a cute story. I could feel the innocence of the your character. She comes across as someone with a vivid imagination(seen where ...

Hey there! Manisha here to review. I really liked this. Your dialogue and flow is really good. You didn't go into much detail and concentrated only on the conversation between ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! Xd. This made me laugh for some strange reason though there is nothing funny going here. It liked the style it was written in. No ...

Hey there Sylvia! I see this is your first post? Congratulations. Firstly, what is a prologue? A prologue should reveal significant facts that contribute to our understanding of the plot. ...