mandeyy

You told me not that you were leaving, You told me not of what I wanted to hear, You simply left me grieving, Growing sadder with each tear. Immediately I ...

All that you took Is all that you'll take; Those sugarcoated numbers All equal a fake. I love the first two lines . They drew me in with their rhythm ...

I just read all three of these poems . The first one was incredible . The second one confused me . All I could think was sex on the side ...

Because it's tired of beating as hard as it can I liked this line . And then being ripped out by people it cares about Awkwardly long , and weird ...

Overall , the thoughts in this seemed scattered . Like you were zoning out while writing . You reallyy need to stick to a certain tense or you risk confusing ...

Ohnoooo there's no more for me to read D: Now I'm sad (: Anyways , the way you bring out emotions is incredible . I love Knight . I think ...

Damn I noticed two or so errors but I was too involved in the story to notice . D: I don't want TDA and Wren to fight . And Tommy ...

Dayum girl . You write some twisted stories . (: I love them . though I was sure we were already on live television, The only thing I noticed . ...

One thing that bothered me was how cold Wren has gotten. She seems to resent everyone around her and feels no sympathy for Jensen, Mattie, or her father. Has something ...

Ohh . The poor mother . Eep I can't write any more as I must read on ! :D But wonderful chapter , and I'm very frustrated with Mattie . ...

WHOA ; That was intense . I loved it . There was no way he could have heard me, but Phil Hendrick knew an invitation when he saw one. His ...

Haha poor Jensen . He just doesn't get it . And ohh Phil . (: Little some'n some'n going on ? :D As usual , it's wonderful . I'm a ...

Geez , yet another amazing story ? Ridiculous ;D If looks could kill, he would definitely be dead. “When is it?” He was talking to Jensen again. I thought this ...

Ahaa , you own at rhyming poetry . (: I like the short crispness of the lines , I've always thought it takes skill to write so short . In ...

I'm interested :D I want to know what happens ... keep writing now >D The conversation between them seemed kinda awkward for best friends, but it might be the situation ...