malachitear

Man. Oh man. Yeah, I do now! After I so seriously flirted with the idea of it being a fly too... You're welcome for the review though! Hope it helped ...

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I realise I'm the one who probably dragged this up accidentally :( didn't notice the date!

I'm sorry, but is this really a piece? Forgive me for my ignorance :( Reading the reviews do make me laugh. Rather intriguing though! ~This is just a comment. -Binder

No problem :D

Sorry, its Shift (plus) Enter!

No problem SkyeJane! I learnt a handy tip from someone who reviewed me! Press Shift space when you want to add indents!

Sorry, just saw this. Why's that?

Hey there! Are we to review a review? XD It was fun to read, and I agree with you on many accounts! Keep Writing! ~Binder

Thanks so much! :D Go Apple Dumpling Gang!

Most of the things you pointed out were intentioal, but thaks for taking the time to review :D

I didn't want to post this up before I finished editing the previous poem, but I guess I didn't want to waste the chance to put it up for free ...

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Hey, thanks for the review! I'll work on it! And, sure :D

Thanks! For the sneaky hint about the shift button too(it worked). That last bit was mainly to round up the first part of the poem :D Hmm. I get what ...