makepastanotwar

Ouch this one just hurt. I mean right in the feels. "The angels won, as two loves die". That line was just so sad. I love the tone of this ...

I really like the concept of kaleidoscope eyes it's nice and creative. Plus the idea that everyone is a scientist. That part is alittle different from you average mutant story ...

This one was fun and really short, though even with two characters there was really no development. Just "hi there" and death. Though that's really what evil mermaids or sirens ...

Hey! I enjoyed this. It caught my attention right away and the wording was strong, though a bit rushed. But, it is only a prologue so I know everything will ...