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Re: Into the Depths. 1
I love this! I think it would help if you'd describe the main character a little more; this may be because I'm a visual person, and I like imagining the ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Hey there! This was really well written, though I'm a little disappointed the narrator didn't talk as much; she sounded like she might have had a little bit of an ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears Prt. 1
Alright, just a few small errors here and there, "His legs had been ripped apart by a weapon I swear the Devil invented and gave to man, canister shot." I ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
All I can say is: YES! I'm a strong Christian and I can't tell you how many times others have given me weird looks for it, or excluded me from ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Lost Carnage I
First thought: girl power! YES! :DDD I didn't want it to end! You should definitey write more to this, carry it on to a bigger storyline somehow. There's potential in ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Art of Dying
Hey there! I loved this peice, you really caught the essense of the dry atmosphere, though I think you could have dragged on her exasperation a little more rather than ...
May 3, 2011