madisonmae

I really love your ending line. It seems to wrap up your whole poem very well and leave your reader with a this completed feeling and a truth about generalities ...

I love how this poem is a little bit mysterious and makes the reader think. I re-read this a few times and I really like how it turned out! Its ...

Really really beautiful imagery is used here. Your sensory details are beautifully used, but I feel that you could do even more. Grab your readers by the hand and drag ...

Yes this piece was a bit strange and I'm sure you know that, but it was actually also really excellent! I can tell you are stretching yourself and stepping out ...

This story I thought was actually really interesting and definitely could be made into a book. You have a lot of action going on here and it keeps readers on ...

This is a really good chapter! I haven't read your other chapters, but from this I am definitely going to have to go back and read them! The story is ...

This is so sad and sweet!! I love how in the end it doesn't end with the clichê love story, but more of a realistic one. I can feel Mari's ...