madisonfrevert

Thank you so much!!

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it (:

Hi! Thank you for the review (: I was simply trying to convey how humans seem to be drawn in or intrigued by disastrous things, though they might be failures ...

Its amazing how deep of a story you can create with only five lines. This is absolutely wonderful and I love the unique topic. Its always nice to find poetry ...

Thank you so much! :) Everyone on this website is simply amazing. It is the only site where I have actually been able to get feedback on anything I've written...you ...

Wow you are too kind...thank you so much for your feedback (: I never thought that this piece would provoke such a response...that is one of the many things I ...

I would try to explain why it is titled Hellbound, but I feel as though it would defeat the purpose...the conjunctions in the last two lines are used to show ...

I had just noticed the awkward shift in verb tenses right as you must have been writing this review...I made some changes and I like the outcome much better (that ...

I love the repetitive use of the phrase "now, look." Also, it is a very unique trait to be able to read something that you have strong opinions about and ...

I absolutely love the 3rd stanza, particularly when you say "they're falling back down my throat and scratching up my lungs."