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Re: Underworld High
Thanks for the reviews guys I appreciate it. I have, as you can see, cut it way shorter and added as well as deleted a few things. Well, the other ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: This Posted is Dead. Don't read
I like the plot, but you really need to use a spell check and reread it. For there are some spelling errors, tense errors and you tend to repeat yourself. ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: It only gets worse - chapter 1 - adapted :)
You still have a few spelling errors like 'draw' should be drawer or drawers I'm not sure which you meant. But other than that it was good and ver captivating. ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: random part of a story - revised
This story is suspensfull and breathtaking. You have a vivid imagination and can express it in written words so it hums with the same detail and rhythm. Amazing, good job.
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue
WOW
Mar 4, 2009