lysp23

I applaud you for facing this. You said you've been having nightmares, I am sorry, but I can see and understand why. I love how you've displayed this as well. ...

It is very deep, and I love your style. You can really draw a reader in, which is key to being a writer. However, I don't understand all of the ...

I loved the story it really grabs your interest. I do however have a few issues with it, well one in particular. You told how everything happened to Allysia and ...

The story line is good and I understand it which is a plus (i get confused a lot), but the sentences are too choppy for my liking and there can ...

I understand why he detests the phrase so, but because of his animosity towards it and the past makes me want to find out more. I want to read more., ...

Interesting, confusing in the beginning for me at least, but then again I get confused easilly. but anyway it was good, very actually. A few spelling errors, but i don't ...

I agree with everyone who reviewed this before me, it's very well written and I would love to read the final draft and any of your other pieces. It makes ...