lyrical_sunshine

This was amazing and actually made me cry a little. But I do agree with Snoink - I'd like to hear more about the stories behind the scars, so we ...

Wow. I'm admittedly very, very bad at critiquing poetry, but I thought this was beautiful. I loved loved LOVED the lines "Sweet boy, good boy/ Just a boy who could ...

Um, okay, I'm totally stupid. I don't understand the last line. Will someone please explain?

Alright, so I think I'm going to do a sort-of-sequel to this - the same style from Owen's perspective. :) I don't know when it will be up, though.

Yeah, I know he writes Christian fiction. :) I don't know, maybe I'm just a sucker for plot twists. I haven't read Chosen. I think his oldest books are probably ...

Oh gosh, I so read The Magic Bicycle like 8 years ago. I had forgotten until now. I think even at ten I thought it was rather lame.

Awesome! Thank you all so very much for your input! I think I'm going to take the pieces from the first version that you all liked and mix it with ...

It's a rant. I'm pretty sure it's not supposed to be great poetry. But it is funny. :)

No, that's really helpful. Thank you. :) I'm not sure how to make that phrase more specific, though...any ideas?

Revamped yet again. :) Attn. Agent: What would you do if your worst nightmare was the only thing that could save your life? I understand from your website that you ...

Kylan, I swear you exist just to make the rest of us look inadequate. *glare* This was beautiful, as usual. Nothing to report beyond the fact that I'm jealous and ...

:shock: I want more! Like, you have no idea how badly I want more! That was more addicting than Narnia. Or green tea. Or the Twilight soundtrack. More? Pleeeez?

I thought Jonas did die...? I didn't know there were sequels! I'm so excited! *goes off to read them*

I really loved the Host too, much better than the Twilight series. Haven't read nineteen minutes yet...I really want to. The Host is freaking awesome though. It's definitely Stephenie Meyer's ...

This was made of awesome. Really. I have nothing to critique because it was oozing so much awesome.